Assignment 3- Feedback
Mr Alexander’s feedback arrived today for the assignment people and place.
He made a number of comments both positive and negative in relation to the images that I had submitted.
His main point was that he did not feel as though I had taken enough care in the framing of the images. This has resulted in a number of converging verticals.
His report contained advice on how theses can be avoided and he further stated that I should look at two photographers , Peter Bobby and David Moor.
I will do this over the next few days and after I have looked at their work I will attempt to do some “tweaking” on my images before I submit them for assessment.
He also made positive comments about my learning log and again offered advice re its layout. I will also look at this over the weekend.