Assignment 4 Feedback following new submission
Mr Taylor also made comment on my new submission for assignment 4. This assignment asked you to design the cover of a magazine.
…”You have also provided, by email, a copy of your amended version of the magazine cover for assignment 4. The design of the new cover is very much better. The title shown in blue, with crest, is distinctive, helping the magazine to be easily recognised.
A small point is that the text at top left has acquired an unwanted punctuation that could easily be removed (‘Issue 3). The items on the cover have been simplified and the background is also simpler and no longer distracting, resulting in a clearer message as to the contents of the magazine.
Well done for following up the assignment feedback.
When you submit for assessment, do send both versions, ensuring that you indicate which came first.