This morning I received my tutor report from Mr. Taylor. As in my previous report his feedback was clear, helpful and honest, as I would have expected. It is only after reading his comments with a copy of the images in front of me that you can see straight away what I should have submitted some of the images in a different way.
Mr. Taylor said that a number of images could be improved.
He liked the image but felt that the subjects were two large in the frame.
Maybe this image of two fishermen on the beach at Worthing would have been better?
Vertical and Horizontal lines
The image I selected did not meet the standard as the lines did not form vertical or horizontal lines to the frame.
A second shot that I took of the same building may work better?
I am looking at these sections again awaits further update
Stair picture subjected to a little work in Photoshop to remove clutter
Distinct if irregular shapes and pattern
Image altered as requested
Above image cropped as requested
I was rather pleased with Mr. Taylor’s comment and I have tried to sort out some of the problems he raised, although more work and some detailed reading is required I have already started the next chapter in the course .